House of "SPRAIN"
“Zzzzzpppp” “Zzzzzpppp”
A
light on the ceiling flashes on and off with a zap of electricity.
“Zzzzzpppp”
“Zzzzzpppp”
“Zzzzzpppp”
The
light, flashes again and again, eventually it stays on.
In
the middle of the room, three young women lay on the ground. As the Light
slowly wakes them up they come too.
“What
happened?”
“Where
am I?”
“WTF?”
The
three girls all know each other, they attend the same college. Laura is 22,
Stacey is 21 and Tammie is also 21. All the three young females are what you
might say a 10 out of 10, but also share a trait of leading less fortunate
young men into very uncomfortable situation, commonly inviting them to parties
only to be teased and tortured and used as the joke of the party.
WELL
NO MORE...........
The
three girls stagger to get up, pulling themselves off the floor. The room is
basically empty. There is a wooden chair in the middle of the room and a box in
the corner. Laura, heads to large steel door that contains them within the
room, she grasps the handle and tries to open it. But it appears to be locked
from the outside.
Stacey
and Tammie look around the room for another way out, but the room is lined with
concrete walls. Tammie starts to freak out a little, screaming “HELP, SOMEONE
HELP US”, but her screams go unheard.
A
deep muffled voice starts to speak
“Welcome,
Laura, Stacey and Tammie. You have been chosen to make write all the pain and
suffering you have caused me and other people you have hurt. You may recall one
party, 6 months ago, when a certain person was invited, only to arrive and get
ransacked, blind folded and gagged, and tied to the tree naked. Then they
shaved all my body hair and then with high strength adhesive turned me into a
human piñata. Only to be still hanging there in the morning feeling abused and
shamed. So now it’s your turn to feel my pain, the physical pain and the
hopelessness that you have brought onto me and others alike. There is no point screaming for help, no one
will hear you. If you do what is required you will all be home by the morning.
Open
the box and you will find out what to do next”
“Crackle,
Crackle”
Laura
moves the box closer to the three of them and they all gather around. Laura rips off the tape holding the box
closed. Inside are three smaller boxes, one with each of the girl’s names on
them.
They
each open there box, inside the box is a dress each and a pair of high heels.
The girls freak out, when they realise that this is what they were wearing at
that party 6 months ago. At the bottom of the large box, there is an envelope.
Stacey grabs the envelope and opens it up. Inside she finds a written note.
It
reads “If you are reading this you have opened the box and are ready to start.
I have been kind enough to give you the clothes you were wearing that night at
the party, you must change into these clothes. Now it’s time for the pain and
hopelessness. Each of you must sprain one ankle. I have supplied a chair to help
you. When I’m satisfied the door will unlock. Time is ticking ladies....”
Stacey
drops the envelope. “This guy is crazy, I’m not doing it.” She throws her box
down on the floor. All three start to bang on the door, “let us out you freak”
From
behind the girls, a noise begins. It’s coming from behind the wall directly
opposite to the door. As the noise gets louder, The wall starts to move towards
the door. Tammie screams, “The wall is moving”.
As
the wall slowly inches further towards the door, the girls start to panic.
Stacey attempts to push against the wall but her attempts are futile. Laura
takes charge, “Let’s get our cloths on”.
They
quickly get changed, and throw all there cloths on the ground. “Has anyone
sprained an ankle before”, Laura asks. They all look at each other, “No, No
No....”
Stacey
pipes up, “I think I have an idea. If we jump off the chair it should work”.
Stacey moves towards the chair and climbs on top of it. Laura and Tammie take a
step to the side. Stacey closes her eyes, and jumps forward off the chair, as
she lands her right high heel snaps causing her ankle to roll outwards. She
tumbles to the floor, grasping her ankle. “Oh god, my ankle” she quickly slides
the rest of her high heel off her foot. Laura
moves close to her and leans down.
“Do
you think its sprained Stacey?”
Stacey
looks at her ankle, which is starting to throb, then slides the shoe of her
left foot. “Help me up to see if I can walk.”
The
two girls help her up off the floor she positions her right foot forward and
take a step, she grimaces at first, but after a couple steady paces she feels
ok, able to bear weight with a limp. “Yes it’s defiantly a minor sprain.”
The
girls forget about the limited time, as the wall draws closer and closer, the
wall has reached the chair and knocks it over, reminding the girls to hurry up.
Laura asks if Tammie wants to go next. Tammie looks nervous and scared but nods
her head to agree. Laura grabs the chair and stands it back up right, the wall
continuing to move. Tammie climbs up on the chair, and closes her eyes, she
stands there shaking. “I can’t do it, please I can’t.” The wall continues to
move, as it gets closer to the chair there is only about 1 meter of room left.
The wall bumps the chair and sends Tammie lunging forward, her left heel breaks
and her ankle rolls out as she stumbles to the floor. Stacey helps her quickly,
removing her shoes and helping her to stand up, she too can bare weight, a
minor sprain. Laura grabs the chair, with little time and room to spare and
stands on top of it. Laura closes her eyes and jumps off the chair she lands
awkwardly due to the limited room. Laura’s right high heel snaps causing her to
lose balance and her right ankle to twist outwards. She manages to stay
standing, grasping at the wall for support, she puts some pressure on her right
foot, still wearing heels. She manages to walk with a limp.
“Clunk,
Clunk, whirrrrrr”
The
heavy steel door unlatches and swings open. The girls lung out the door,
limping to get away from the trap behind them.
Once
out the door way they find themselves in a dark and long hallway. Imminent
danger seems no longer so they all collapse to the floor. Laura removes her
high heels, to inspect her ankle as well. A minor sprain as well.
They
compose themselves for a few minutes thinking that its all over, they are free
to go. Just as they start to relax, another speaker comes to life.
“Crackle crackle”
The
speaker goes silent. Laura looks at the other girls, “What’s part 2?”
Tammie
breaks the silence, “is that my sneakers!”
The
girls turn around and not more than a couple meters away resting against the
wall are the girls own sneakers and socks. The three of them help each other
up, and make their way over to the shoes. In between two pairs of shoes there
is an envelope.
They
all agree, and sit down to put there sneakers on. None of their minor sprains
causing too much grief, and the sneakers will help the situation, initially.
Whilst the just finished putting their sneakers on, there is a noise coming
from down the half. Laura, “what is that?”
The
girls stand up, now wearing dresses and the sneakers and ankle socks. They
start to move towards the opposite direction to the noise. Stacey looks back, and
sees what appears to be a beastly Doberman, round the hall way. The dog sees
them, and stops, positioning its self to attack, growling loudly, and its mouth
salivating at the thought of a kill.
The
girls scream, as the dog starts too bound forward, “RUNNNNNNNN”.
The
girls take off sprinting down the hall way, the sound of the vicious dog looms
closer and closer. They reach the end of the hall way. The girls stop and look
left and right, the right passage has a steel gate obstructing it forcing them
to turn left. At the end of the left corridor they see a door that i slightly
open.
The
girls turn left and start running, Tammie and Stacey taking the lead with Laura
following behind. The Doberman rounds the bend catching them with every bound.
Invisible to the Tammie and Stacey is a low trip wire, hidden by the darkness.
As the both reach it they, trip miss placing their feet, jarring there already
slightly sprained ankles. They both tumble to the floor like rag dolls
clutching at their ankles. Laura steps over the wire and in one foul swoop
grabs hold of both the other girls and pulls them up. They hobble along, their
ankles hurting more than before. As they reach the door, Laura pushes it open
dragging the other two through the door. Laura turns around and sees how close
the Doberman is growling and barking loudly, she quickly slams the door closed,
and locks it. Just as she springs the lock she a loud THUMP, comes from the
door. Laura stumbles backwards landing on her bottom. The Doberman whines a
little and then goes quiet.
The
girls appear relieved, as the sit there taking in a breath.
Stacey
and Tammie sit gently rub their ankles which are a little tender after their
fall. Laura gets up and starts investigating the new room they have entered.
There is a door on the other side of the room. She walks over to it, and turns
the handle, but there is deadbolt fitted to the door preventing it from opening
it. As she turns back around, she notices some rope on either side of the room.
On the left hand side is a rope that goes up the wall to a pulley and extends
across the ceiling towards the other side of the room. There is a key loosely tied to the rope with
some twine. She starts to pull on the rope, and the key starts to come across
towards the pulley. There is a large knot in the rope preventing her from
pulling the key through the pulley. The rope stops hard up against the pulley,
with the key hanging in the middle of the room. The other end of the rope is
attached to a large rubber strap that pulls against the rope as she pulls on
it. When she lets go the rope springs back to its original position.
The
ceiling is around 3.5 meters high so well out of jumping reach.
She
sees another larger rope on the right hand wall. This rope is looped through
two pulleys extending up the wall across the ceiling to the centre of the room.
So lowers the rope and it reaches down to the floor of the room. Laura ponders the puzzle for a few minutes as
Stacey and Tammie get up to see what is going on.
“We
need to work as a team. I’m the smallest and lightest here so ill tie the large
rope around my waist, then you two pull
on the rope to lift me up to the ceiling. Then while one of you holds
the rope and keeps me up there the other has to run to the other wall and pull
that rope so that I can reach the key”.
Stacey
and Tammie look at the ropes contemplating Laura’s idea. “I think that will
work as well”, says Stacey.
The
girls put the plan to action. Tammie helps Laura tie the large rope around her
waist. Then Tammie and Stacey move over to the wall and start heaving on the
large rope, slowly Laura rises off the ground.
The girls pull hard as Laura rises, now able to touch the ceiling.
Laura
reaches out trying to grab the key she can just touch it with her finger tip
but can grab it.
“I
can’t reaaaacchh”
Laura
tries again and again to reach the key, she start to swing on the rope, trying
to reach the key. Stacey is struggling to hold on, “I can’t hold it much longer
Laura, and you have to grab it now.”
Laura
gives it everything thing she’s got to try and reach the key, her fingers just
grab it enough to pull it into her hand, as she swings from the rope. “I can’t hold it, it’s its slipping.”
The
rope breaks free from Stacey’s grasp, she fumbles to regain her grip. Laura
edges down a meter, and screams> Stacey can hold it. The rope slips through
her fingers, Laura hurdles towards the floor.
Her right foot lands first, off balance, her whole body weight transfers
to her right foot. Her ankle snaps outwards violently, completely rolling over
under the weight of her crashing down.
Laura
drops the key as she grasps at her right leg, as she tumbles onto her side. She
squirms on the ground moaning loudly, the intense pain radiating from her
ankle. Stacey and Tammie run over to her. Tammie tries to hold her still to
stop moving her ankle, supporting her.
Stacey
grabs her hand to offer support as well. “Fuck, fuck, my ankle.... it’s
bad....” The girls sit there, the pain continuing to radiate from Laura’s
severely sprained ankle. Stacey takes a look at her right ankle, which appears
to be swelling already. “Do you think we should remove your shoe?” Stacey asks
Laura.
“No,
I think we should get moving though.”
Stacey
and Tammie get on opposite sides of Laura and help her to stand. AS they start
to lift her up, the pain in her ankle increases from the weight of her shoe.
“let
me see if I can put any weight on my ankle”
The
girls continue to support her, “Well help you hope Laura” Stacey exclaims. The
three start to slowly make their way to the door. Tammie places the key into
the dead bolt and turns the lock.
Tammie
pushes on the door, and it opens slowly. They help Laura hop through the narrow
door. The room looks long and narrow, but it too dark to see what’s in there.
They only get a couple steps from the door, and it slams shut behind them.
The
room is pitch black once the door closes. The girls stand there waiting for a
few seconds. A speaker on the wall comes to life.
“Crackle
crackle”
“Welcome
to the next test, I hope you haven’t torn to many ligaments Laura! Now you must
take a leap of faith.”
“Crackle
crackle”
The
speaker goes silent, and these giant flood lights come to life shinning
straight in the girls faces. As their
eyes adjust the move forward slowly, “Stop”, yells Stacey.
The
room is 3 wide and about 8 meters long. In the middle of the room is a giant
pit that goes down 5 meters. It runs from walk to wall and is about 2 meters
wide. The walls are flat and the ceiling is high. They can’t see what’s on the
other side due to the bright lights.
Tammie
starts to freak out, “we are going to die, I just know it.”
“I
don’t want to die. This is your entire fault Stacey, I never wanted to have
anything to do with it. If you never took me to that party I wouldn’t be here”
Stacey
gets frustrated with Tammie, “Shut up you bitch I never forced you to do
anything.”
Laura
sits there her right leg stretched straight out, the pain radiating from her
ankle still.
Laura
pipes in, “Shut up you to. Tammie we are not going to die.”
Stacey
stands up and walks back towards the pit, she try’s to block the light to see
what’s on the other side. She looks down the pit, it’s completely black.
She
takes and steps back and paces her way back to the door. She stands there pondering
for a few minutes. She makes her way back to the girls and kneels down next to
Laura.
“What
do you think we should do Stacey?” Laura asks.
“A
leap of faith, I think one of us has to jump over there. Obvious Tammie isn’t
going to do it so I will.”
“Ok,
do you think you can jump that far?”
“Yeah
I think I can get enough of a run up.”
“Ok
then, before you go can you help me remove my shoe and sock, my ankle is to
swollen for this shoe.”
Stacey
looks down at Laura’s Right ankle It has swollen to the size of a softball.
Stacey
gently unties the shoes laces on Laura’s runner and then she feeds the laces
out of the loops, loosening up her shoe as much as possible.
“Tammie,
stop crying and help me”
Tammie
wipes her tears away, and calms down. “Tammie I need you to lift her leg up
while I support her ankle and remove her shoe and sock.”
“Ok”
Tammie
grabs hold of Laura’s lower leg and starts to gently lift it up, Stacey cups
Laura’s foot in her hands as it lifts up. “Ok Laura, I’m going to get your shoe
off, this is probably going to hurt.”
“I’m
ready, just get it off.”
Stacey
starts to work the shoe of slowly. “aaahhh, arrrhhh”
Her
ankle is so swollen that the shoe is firmly held on. She wiggles the shoe
trying to work it off. Slowly the shoe comes off. Laura’s slim size 7 foot,
rests in Stacey palm now.
“Oh
that feels better already”, Ok let’s get your sock off.
Stacey
once again works the sock slowly off. First uncovering her heel and then gently
sliding it off the rest of her foot. Once the sock is removed, Laura lets out a
loud sigh of relief. Stacey looks at Laura’s ankle. The inside and outside of
her ankle is completely swollen. They slowly lower Laura’s Foot back down
resting her heel on her sock that’s on the ground.
Stacey
stands up, “Ok I have to do this, I can do this”.
She
paces back to the door where they came through. She leans up against the wall,
and preps herself to go. She pushes off the wall, and starts sprinting towards
the pit. She reaches the pit and springs of her left foot, she flies over the
pit, blinded the extremely bright lights being shown in her eyes. As she nears the other side, she mistakenly
reaches with her right foot. As she goes to land, the toe of her shoe catches
something on the ground, her ankle goes over as her body weight comes crashing
down on top of it. She feels something pop in her ankle. Her momentum sends her
tumbling along the floor. When she stops she starts cursing out loud. “Ffffaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrkkkkkk
Fuck oh fuck.”
Laura
looks at Tammie, “help me up please.”
Tammie
helps Laura up, she holds her delicate foot, and severely sprained ankle just
off the ground as she slowly hops towards the pit. “Stacey, what happened? Are you ok?” Unable
to see past the bright lights, Tammie and Laura can’t tell what happened.
“Stacey?”
Stacey
finally replies, “I’m Here, I have fucked my ankle. It felt like something
popped in my right ankle.”
Laura
knows that Stacey has severely sprained her right ankle as well.
Stacey
lays there holding her foot and ankle for a few minutes, as the pain settles to
a deep throbbing, she start to look around. There appears to be several timber
planks spread all over the floor. It was this that she landed on causing her to
injure her ankle. She knows she has to
get up.
“Laura,
there are large planks of timber over here. I think they are long enough to
reach the other side. I will try and move them, stand back.”
Laura
takes a few small hops rearward, and Tammie stands next to her for support.
Stacey
composes herself, she knows this is going to be excruciating but she has no
choice. She pulls herself up of the floor onto her knees, then using her left
leg she slowly stand up. As she stands the pain increases in her ankle, as the
blood flows to her foot. She composes herself again, “you can do this Stacey,
you can do it.”
She
tries to reaffirm to herself that she is strong enough o do it. She takes a
step on her right foot, pain radiates instantly up her leg and through her
foot. “Aarrrhh” she grimaces loudly. She manages to move around by applying a
little pressure on her ankle and also slowly hopping. She lifts up the first
plank, and rests it on its end and then pushes it towards the other side of the
pit. The plank falls through the air and goes crashing down on the other side.
Laura calls out to her, “That’s going to work Stacey.” Stacey painfully keeps
going there are 5 planks on the ground. She picks up the second one and slowly
moves it the pit, and drops it into position. The third goes the same, lading
safely across the pit. She picks up the fourth, as she is very slowly moving
closer to the pit, she applies a little too much pressure to her ankle, and she
crumbles in pain. “Aarrrhh, fuck my ankle.” Dropping the plank, it tumbles down
into the pit. She clutches at her now swollen ankle. Stacey takes a moment, as
the pain from putting too much pressure on her ankle takes over her thoughts.
After a minute she pulls herself together, and manages to stand back up. Only
able to hop now she slowly moves around, grabbing the last plank. She
manoeuvres it into position, and sends it falling. It crashes down onto the
other side of the pit. Seconds later Stacey sits down crippled by the pain
radiating from her ankle.
Tammie
does her best to arrange the planks into some sort of bridge. To narrow for two
people to cross side by side, and to weak for two people to cross as once.
Laura
looks at Tammie, “you go first and help Stacey.” Tammie does not think twice
and quickly scurries across the wobbly bridge.
Laura knows she won’t be able to hop across the bridge afraid that it
may move and she will tumble into the pit below.
She
extends her right foot forward and places it on the ground she transfers her
weight and takes a small step. “Aarrggh...” Every step more painful than the
last she slowly makes her way across the bridge. “Almost there, almost there”,
she repeats to herself as she moves forward only a matter of inches every step.
“Five
more steps, Four more steps, three more steps, two more steps, one more step.”
She
reaches the other side safely. By the time she gets there Tammie has helped
Stacey remove her shoe and sock, Stacey’s ankle now just as swollen as Laura’s.
Tammie
helps Stacey up, she hops holding her right foot just off the ground. Laura and
Stacey now both using Tammie for support they slowly move toward the door,
Tammie swings it open, they enter the room, slowly. The lights come on, and the
girls take a seat on the ground Laura and Stacey comfort each other both in a
fair amount of pain from walking on their badly sprained ankles.
“Crackle
crackle”
“Very
good ladies, one last test and you’re on your way home. Tammie seen as though
you are the last person standing, literally, you now have to make a choice. In
the cupboard is a hammer. You can choose to break your own ankle and share in
the pain your friends feel, or be the selfish person you are and break your
friend’s ankles.
Stacey
and Laura look at each other, while they share the same thought. Surely Tammie
will do it to herself and not to them.
“You
can do it Tammie, you can break your ankle”, Stacey exclaims.
Tammie,
walks towards the cupboard and opens the door. Sitting on the middle shelf is a
brand new hammer. She grabs the hammer, her brain in over drive in what she is
going to do. She moves back towards the girls and sits down. She moves her left
foot in front of her, and moves the hammer up and down as if she is going to do
it.
“No
i can’t do it” AS she swings the hammer she aims for Laura’s left ankle. Laura
is too quick and moves her left leg out of the way, as the hammer bashes into
the concrete floor. Laura lurches forward and grabs hold of the hammer. Tammie
and Laura wrestle for the hammer, as Stacey gets up and hops around to grab the
hammer. “Get the hammer Stacey”, Laura shouts. “If she won’t break her ankle we
will do it for the selfish bitch.”
The
dark side of Tammie now exposed, the girls wrestle for the hammer. Stacey
manages to grab pull the hammer from Tammies grasp, but it goes flying across
the room. Stacey turns to hop after it, but Tammie trips her with her leg.
Stacey goes crashing down on the floor.
Laura
breaks free and pulls herself away from Tammie. Tammie grabs her sprained ankle
and starts to squeeze it. Laura screams, in pain as Tammie twists her ankle
more and more. “’Stop Stop”. Stacey drags herself up and starts to crawl towards
the hammer, Laura tries to break free but the pain from Tammie twisting her
severely sprain ankle is too much. She gives in, and goes limp. Tammie releases
Laura’s ankle. Laura grabs her ankle, in tears the pain radiating more than
ever. Tammie gets up and hurry’s over
towards the hammer, Stacey sees her coming and makes one desperate lung,
grasping the handle in her hand. Tammie too grabs the hammer, and they wrestle
on the ground. Stacey can see Laura starting to move closer out of the corner
of her eye. Laura drags her severely sprained ankle along the ground as she
moves closer. Stacey breaks free and slides the hammer onto the ground before
grabbing hold of Tammie. Tammie and Stacey wrestle as Laura draws closer and
closer to the hammer. Tammie grabs Stacey’s sprained ankle and with one fast
motion, twists it violently. Her ankle lets out a loud pop, another ligament
has completely snapped. Stacey crumbles into tears, grasping her ankle.
Laura
grabs the hammer, Tammie turns around. Stacey grabs Tammie holding her still.
Laura swings the hammer high and brings it down crashing towards her left
ankle. Tammie tries to move her foot up and out of the way, but the shaft of
the hammer catches her leg. The force of the swing pushes her leg outwards, her
toes connecting with the concrete. The force from the hammer pushing against
her leg, her bones are too strong the pressure is transferred to her ankle.
Enough force that her ankle is forced out of its socket and dislocates. Her
left foot now pointed sharply inwards, Tammie screams as she realises her ankle
is dislocated. Laura throws the hammer across the room before collapsing in
pain from her own ankle.
The
girls are so pre occupied, that haven’t realised that the room has slowly been
filling with gas. They start to cough. Stacey tries to crawl towards the door,
but within a few seconds they all pass out.
A
FEW HOURS LATER
“Everyone
over here I think I have found them”
THE
NEXT MORNING
Laura’s
eyes start to flutter, as she awakens. Her vision blurred, her senses impeded.
She slowly comes too as she awakes to find herself in a hospital bed. The Nurse
sees her awaken. Stacey and Tammie slowly start to wake as well. All three
girls are in one room together.
They
are all confused and dazed, not sure what happened. Was it a bad dream? Laura
tries to move her legs when she is met with a very sharp pain in her right
ankle. She sits up a little to see her right ankle bandaged and encased within
an air cast. She looks around, Stacey too has an air cast on her right ankle,
and Tammie has her leg raised in a sling with what looks like a plaster cast.
“What,
What happened”, Laura curiously questions the nurse.
“Oh
honey, don’t you remember anything from last night. You three girls where at a
party, when you wondered off into the nearby woods with a bloke, he said you
started running and got separated. He returned to raise the alarm when he
couldn’t find you. They found you this morning. All three of you were within
100 meters of each other. You and Stacey have severely sprained ankles, and
Tammie has a dislocated ankle. You have
torn your ATFL completely and Stacey has torn her ATFL and CTFL. You will both
be on crutches for several months and require physio therapy. Tammie dislocated
her ankle and has torn all the ligaments, and is scheduled for surgery next
week. You are all very lucky. The boy that raised the alarm left you some
flowers this morning.”
The
nurse points to the flowers next to Laura’s bed. Laura pulls herself up enough
to grab the little card attached to the flowers. She opens the card and it
reads, “Treat others as you wish to be treated.”
The
End
i love it man
ReplyDeleteplease post some pics also
ReplyDeleteHey Spinner - wonderful story, I especially like the pain and torture theme throughout. Great imagination, keep it up.
ReplyDelete--Alex
Stumbled across your blog. Love it. Especially the forced theme! I love to wear high heels myself to sprain my ankle, I'd love it broken too!
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